its all my misatake….

its all my mistake,
he never loved me ….
n i thought that he loves me more than anything !!!!!!!

its all my mistake,
he smiled for a flower…..
n i thought he is smiling for me !!!!!!!!!!!11

its all my mistake,
he use to say yes on everything…..
n i thought that he loves me!!!!!!!!!!

its all my mistake,
he had always given importance to this world ……
n i thought he gives his every second to me!!!!!!!!!!!

its all my mistake,
he told me there is some one else in my life…….
n i thought that even my life is only for him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its all my fault………

25 thoughts on “its all my misatake….

  1. Jingle says:

    post your poem in your own blog,
    link in to my post to let me know, then comment

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/30/thursday-poets-rally-week-24-july-1-7-2010/

  2. Jingle says:

    this is a very beautiful poem,
    love the way you represent it..
    smiles!

  3. Kavita says:

    This is what I mean when I say ‘straight from the heart’! Fantabulous!!!

  4. brian says:

    i felt that one…tight…

  5. ishabelle says:

    it’s always the pain of unrequited love…. so sad…. 🙂

  6. buttercup600 says:

    So very creative and honest. Loved it so 🙂

  7. Artswebshow says:

    Wonderful poem.
    I can relate to it.
    Personally i like to turn that pain on itself and use it to create.
    It’s a very effective form of motivation

  8. anummunaf says:

    thanx toooo all

  9. Very sad. But let the words flow out and take the pain of your heart.

    Remember “misery” likes eternity – http://keshavnarla.wordpress.com/2010/07/01/nothing-to-say/

  10. Jingle says:

    happy july 4th…

    visit as many poets as possible if you are free…
    Happy July 4th!

  11. hoiden says:

    wonderful..at one point of time in our lives each one of us can relate to what u wrote here…
    http://hoiden.wordpress.com/2010/07/04/journal-entry-101/

  12. Loved it although it was sad…it’s so true how we blame ourselves for what went wrong in a relationship…Thank you for sharing.

  13. Jingle says:

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/08/the-celebrate-poet-of-june-award-nomination-announcement/

    time to vote again,
    please scan the links and vote for 1 to 20 poets, thank you in advance!

    next Rally post will be on July 21, 2010.

  14. williewizzy says:

    it’s a mistake after all.

  15. Olivia says:

    I am so inspired by your Blog Template- I love bright colors too…….. 🙂

  16. Olivia says:

    This reminds me of my story.. Only, now it’s my turn to give it back- waiting for the right time.. You write so well.. Difficult to believe that it’s only words and no pain…
    Bless you..

  17. Olivia says:

    Hello, friend, how are you?

    I invite you to our Monday Poetry Potluck Party at Jingle Poetry Community, a new place for poets who share ans encourage…

    We have features such as poem of the week, poetry blog of the week, and poet of the week, plus Sunday poetry news dispatch, if you attend our Monday Party, there is a chance that you poetry blog is represented by one of our officials, and your talent will be highlighted or exposed to wider audience,

    No specific rules, simply linking in 1 to 3 poems, it could be an old poem, let us read and comment for you. Feel free tasting other poetry treats, all enjoyable expereicne…

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-potluck-big-bang.html

    Click on the link, you will see a blue button, click on the blue button, you will see three boxes, your specific poem link to be placed in first, then your name or blog name, then your email connected to your blog….

    Happy Monday!
    Let the fun begin!
    Cheers!

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