Fade Away

With every year passing

let this year passed away

An year of warrant

An year of insanity

With every month passing

let this month fade away

A month of regret

A month of restlessness

With every day passing

let this day fade away

A day of scarsm

A day of Bluntnesss

With every hour passing

let this hour fade away

An hour of astonishment

An hour of grief

With every minute passing

Let this minute fade away

A minut of mistake

A minute of guilt

With every second passing

let this second fade away

A second of frustrations

A second of angerness

With everyΒ momentΒ passing

let this moment fade away

A moment to praise

A moment to honour

With every life passing

let this life fade Β away

A life of being agreeable

A life of dis couragement

Let this life fade away

Let this life fade awaay

33 thoughts on “Fade Away

  1. Ubaid says:

    I like it πŸ™‚

  2. Jingle says:

    beautiful…
    πŸ˜‰

  3. A.B. Thomas says:

    Fantastic write! It was a very zen-like read, thoroughly enjoyable!

  4. fifahaywire says:

    *thumbs up*
    πŸ™‚

  5. so nice, a beautiful poem πŸ™‚

  6. saba says:

    its just awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! i m lovin’ it! πŸ™‚

  7. Vinay says:

    very inspiring πŸ™‚

  8. Jingle says:

    adorable……

    you rock.
    πŸ™‚

    πŸ™‚

  9. Sidrah says:

    lovely poem =)

    BTW I haven’t studied a word =[

  10. Kiran Ashraf says:

    very true sometimes i also really really wish that all that is arround would fade away and never appear again. beautifully written : )

  11. Jack Edwards says:

    Brilliant poem with an amazing use of repetition

  12. Andy says:

    Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

  13. Lu Ann says:

    I felt there, inside your words. I`ve had years, minutes, hours, seconds, moments like that, exactly like those you describe.

    I really enjoyed.

    Happy Rally!!

    Lu Ann

  14. Thanks for posting this good article!

  15. shamtest says:

    I can’t seem to access this site from my droid!!

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  17. Eddie says:

    fantastic read. Real talent. (Y)

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