Adhori se hai zindagi
adhore hain hum,
bujh rhe hain saanse
jaal rhe hain hum,
badalte massomun ne
sikhaya hai bht kuch,
LEKIN
Pane ke hasrat main sab
kch koh rhe hain hum,
na maloom manzalon par
qadam rok se gaye hain,
Bheer main raston ki taraf
barh rhe hain hum,
Toot kar bikhre hain
khuwab kuch is tarah,
K
Ik arsa huwa un ko
chun rhe hain hum,
Wafa ke hum ne un se
ya ke bawafai,
bus us ki saza
bhugat rhe hain hum
Life's illusion 
Beautiful lines 🙂
awww so touching 🙂
thnx
In general, we write a poem, find an image to illustrate or reflect our work, Now, let’s go reverse, we provide you an image,
Invite you to contribute a poem or a short story based on the image you see,
Be creative,
Have fun!
Hope to see you in…
Bluebell Books!
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got to write new ones…
ahhhh… hard work………….
very nicely written. although you did not write it in a ghazal format of verses being in pair. Nevertheless its really nice to see you writing so well both in english and urdu 🙂 kudos
ahhh thnx 🙂
you’re a goooood poet, anum =D
hmmm thnx dear 🙂
Yes, it was more of a ‘nazam’ than a traditional ‘ghazal’ but nevertheless it was good 🙂
hmmm thnx 🙂
beautifuly written. i remembered a very dear friend who broke up with his girl and felt the same as u descibed in yr ghazal. good job 🙂
its fiction dear 🙂
beautiful gazal
🙂
بہت خوب۔
thnx 🙂
Thank you for a great post.
Haseel se La hasil tak k safer mai manzil tu nai hoti mager yeh safar hi manzil hota hai or kahaan ho pai hai kise ki zaat ko taqmeel ki manzil.?
wah je wah 🙂