Ghazal

Adhori se hai zindagi

adhore hain hum,

 bujh rhe hain saanse

jaal rhe hain hum,

badalte massomun ne

sikhaya hai bht kuch,

LEKIN

Pane ke hasrat main sab

kch koh rhe hain hum,

na maloom manzalon par

qadam rok se gaye hain,

Bheer main raston ki taraf

barh rhe hain hum,

Toot kar bikhre hain

khuwab kuch is tarah,

K

Ik arsa huwa un ko

chun rhe hain hum,

Wafa ke hum ne un se

ya ke bawafai,

bus us ki saza

bhugat rhe hain hum

20 thoughts on “Ghazal

  1. simran kaur says:

    Beautiful lines 🙂

  2. aisha says:

    awww so touching 🙂

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  4. Eddie says:

    very nicely written. although you did not write it in a ghazal format of verses being in pair. Nevertheless its really nice to see you writing so well both in english and urdu 🙂 kudos

  5. Sidrah says:

    you’re a goooood poet, anum =D

  6. Tauqeer says:

    Yes, it was more of a ‘nazam’ than a traditional ‘ghazal’ but nevertheless it was good 🙂

  7. Kiran Ashraf says:

    beautifuly written. i remembered a very dear friend who broke up with his girl and felt the same as u descibed in yr ghazal. good job 🙂

  8. sm says:

    beautiful gazal

  9. Saad says:

    بہت خوب۔

  10. Thank you for a great post.

  11. adhoura aks says:

    Haseel se La hasil tak k safer mai manzil tu nai hoti mager yeh safar hi manzil hota hai or kahaan ho pai hai kise ki zaat ko taqmeel ki manzil.?

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