i was born to be a kid
i dont knw when i became an elder son to my parents
elder to my siblings
a listener to my friends to pamper them
but all in all i m just a girl
i did learn to defeat
i did learn to face all the mishap
i learn to live up with my all unfortunates
n i lived up to be very strong, indeed
after all i m a girl
i still pretended to be courageous
i still had faced this world
i m still living after being unfavourable
n i m still calm
after all this i m a girl
Life's illusion 
Very nice poem, Reflecting your life 🙂 Good that someone is writing except ‘love’
nope its not like that i dont write about it but everything needs a change 🙂
A short story of any girl, but has wide meaning.
Anyways good job 🙂
hm thnx for commenting 🙂
way to go, vivid and magical write.
hm thnx 🙂
Tells a lot about you. Keep it up 🙂
i knw 🙂 n thnx 🙂
I appreciate the thought of the whole literary piece but I would suggest something. Some parallelism perhaps, maybe in the organization of thoughts or how one concept connects to another. And sometimes, when someone hears “just a girl,” often we connect a gender lens through it but in this case… it is not. So, try to probably specify what kind of girl are we talking about… taking it away from the typical gender association we do with it. 🙂 But, otherwise, you are on a good start here. Write more.
hm thnx…….. but i was writing something n wrote something elsee
n about this i havent have written it rough to make corrections in it 😦
hey dont be sad anum. 🙂 come to think of it…you wrote something from the heart and that’s better than any other poem with just good words but no real emotions.
agreeeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddd 🙂
After all it’s just a good poem. 🙂
but dunno how was the inner thoughts of it. I hope you are courageous, polite, strong and kind
thnx 🙂
hey why so touchy touchy:P
mujhe bhe nhe pata 😛
There is great strength in staying calm ….as it’s much easier said than done.