umr ki sari thakkan ladd k ghar jati hun
raat bistar py main soti nhe marr jati hun
aksar aookat, bharay shehar k sannaty main
is qadar zor si hansti hun k dar jati hun
mery anay ke khabar sirf diya rakhta hai
main hawoon ki tarah aa kar guzar jate un
dil thehar jata hai bhooli hui manzil main kahin
main kisi dosre raste se guzar jate hun
simte rehte hun khd main bht main
char diwari main ate he bukahr jait hun main
Life's illusion 
Very sad poetry .. 1 dam motivational se sadness ??
ohhhhhhh i m sorrrrrrrryyyy
I’m almost in tears.. A really poignant ghazal. Each word itself is a manifesto of your profound feelings, and pain. I don’t read urdu ghazals much but I’ll admit this that this one’s one of the best ghazals I’ve come across! Bravo, Anum!
And last but not the least: may Allah solve all your problems and may mishaps and misfortunes be kept away from you and may He also bless you with a long life full of health, wealth and happiness, Ameen!
dont cry………… i m use to of it
n thnx for ur prayers 🙂
n u will find alot more ghazals on this blog 🙂
I’ve read them but this one’s different and you’re welcome.
hmmmm thnx 🙂
Brilliant and amazingly mature and very good poetry anum 🙂
but bcz its sad … so automatically i don’t like it
i knw that………… but neverthelessss i can only write in this tone only….
🙂 nice but very sadistic….
h,mmmmmmmmmmmmmm agredd 🙂
After a long time, brilliant stuff 😀
Would have been much better if you wrote it in ‘urdu text’. 🙂
thnx n u even knw that k it requires alot lime to make it in urdu txt
And you even know that it takes a lot of time to read it in Roman urdu and make sense of it … 😛
hhmmmm ok. i will take care of it
sorry
superb yr i know its been a long time i m here but just read your poetry n cant stop my self without commenting…
i know the tone is very sad but kabi kabi sad poetry bhi chulti hai keep it up but be positive!!
hmmm thnx 🙂