bikhar jati hun

umr ki sari thakkan ladd k ghar jati hun

raat bistar py main soti nhe marr jati hun

aksar aookat, bharay shehar k sannaty main

is qadar zor si hansti hun k dar jati hun

mery anay ke khabar sirf diya rakhta hai

main hawoon ki tarah aa kar guzar jate un

dil thehar jata hai bhooli hui manzil main kahin

main kisi dosre raste se guzar jate hun

simte rehte hun khd main bht main

char diwari main ate he bukahr jait hun main

16 thoughts on “bikhar jati hun

  1. fahad naeem says:

    Very sad poetry .. 1 dam motivational se sadness ??

  2. Maroof A says:

    I’m almost in tears.. A really poignant ghazal. Each word itself is a manifesto of your profound feelings, and pain. I don’t read urdu ghazals much but I’ll admit this that this one’s one of the best ghazals I’ve come across! Bravo, Anum!
    And last but not the least: may Allah solve all your problems and may mishaps and misfortunes be kept away from you and may He also bless you with a long life full of health, wealth and happiness, Ameen!

  3. Ali Adnan says:

    Brilliant and amazingly mature and very good poetry anum 🙂

    but bcz its sad … so automatically i don’t like it

  4. 🙂 nice but very sadistic….

  5. Tauqeer says:

    After a long time, brilliant stuff 😀

    Would have been much better if you wrote it in ‘urdu text’. 🙂

  6. Ayesha Naz says:

    superb yr i know its been a long time i m here but just read your poetry n cant stop my self without commenting…
    i know the tone is very sad but kabi kabi sad poetry bhi chulti hai keep it up but be positive!!

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